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August 8, 2013
10:48 pm
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My antiquated mannerisms, like some forgotten style.

Those that understand me are counted fewer every day.

I am more “was” than “will be.”

I am a man with one distinguishing manner. I view life as a nonstop roll by circus. Whatever my senses signal to my brain, it is received as humor.
August 10, 2013
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Aging... and time.... ah time.... a best friend and worst enemy.... that last line is both quite sad and powerful... I really like emphasis you placed on different parts of this poem because of the tones it creates... Great write.

Perfection; my greatest strength and weakness.
August 13, 2013
3:48 pm
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The different style font was actually a copy and paste error. But I thought I'd keep it that way for just the reason you gave. But now I think I prefer it the way I wrote it. So I edited it. Thanks for your perusal of my write. It is how I feel sometimes.

I am a man with one distinguishing manner. I view life as a nonstop roll by circus. Whatever my senses signal to my brain, it is received as humor.
August 13, 2013
4:04 pm
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Well I went a step farther or further whichever...... Added a little font play to spruce it up.

I am a man with one distinguishing manner. I view life as a nonstop roll by circus. Whatever my senses signal to my brain, it is received as humor.
August 13, 2013
11:43 pm
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I can truly relate with this. I often feel out of my time.  I do love the font play as well as the coloring. It adds emphasis to the poem. 

August 14, 2013
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This is a very thoughtful and great poem!

August 14, 2013
3:52 pm
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Thats because I'm so thoughtful and great! Oh and full of myself too apparently

I am a man with one distinguishing manner. I view life as a nonstop roll by circus. Whatever my senses signal to my brain, it is received as humor.
August 16, 2013
12:22 pm
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First of all, I love how the words fade...like time.... Adds to the strength and thoughtfulness of this piece. 

My identity can be found in my writing

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