Thanks for the comments
The "to" or "too" concept is interesting, will mull that over some. I had a hard time with cutting the line "In a flurry of red, green, silver, and gold" down it was rough and I got nowhere, might try to change that before it ends.
Funny, that line was the most visual and brought the memories of growing up at my grandparents house. They went all out with a silver tree with long strings of red and gold tinsil everywhere. Granpa had a light with a cover that had four colored lenses that whould rotate and change the tree color constantly. And you want to change it. For shame.
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