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The fly
January 2, 2014
8:56 am
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I wish I were a fly apon somebodies wall

to hear about the goings on behind that solid door

Ile be able to tell the spider when he has caught me in his web

so the spider will know my news of when im surely dead

the spider will then tell my gossip to all that he sees

the insects in the garden and the birds resting in the trees

soon my news becomes more world wide

but what I told that spider that day was nothing but a lie

so be sure to think twice about getting that fly spray your secrets safe with me

also dont you dare roll a news paper and  take that swipe at me

 

Copyright 2010 Penny Pink

January 4, 2014
2:36 pm
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An interesting topic! But yet an interesting and amusing read.

also dont you dare roll a news paper and  take that swipe at me

 

^ That last line is definitely my favourite. 

The whole piece feels like a poem to me, especially with the rhyme but that doesn't matter.

A lovely piece.

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January 4, 2014
6:28 pm
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silly  poem really ha ha but thanks for the comments smile

January 13, 2014
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Ha, that was really fun to read! I definitely never thought of a fly's existence in that way. Enjoyed!

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May 30, 2014
9:51 am
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i forgot i put this piece on hlaughere ha ha only just read comments forgive me

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