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Invented Past
January 15, 2013
5:16 pm
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This is a found poem from both selections..hopefully all the words are in the originals, this is the first time I've ever done this, but I tried 

 

Imagination is the

Most important achievement

In the evening and endlessness

I remember what I'd like to

Forget, the past 

Memory changed the evening

I keep talking- coloring, casting

Aside, the past

Imagination is northern lights

Coloring the past

What we choose to say

About our past becomes

Our past, malleable and invented 

January 15, 2013
8:42 pm
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Nice work arranging these words, there are lots of great lines here. It is well written and wonderfully expressed :)

"Imagination is northern lights

Coloring the past"

That is an absolutely amazing metaphor :)

Perfection; my greatest strength and weakness.
January 16, 2013
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I agree-the northern lights line is my favorite! I like how fast-paced this is for me personally. It gives a strong message even more strength while also a flair to add to the beautiful words you have chosen! I really enjoy reading your work!

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January 24, 2013
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uniquelylost said
Nice work arranging these words, there are lots of great lines here. It is well written and wonderfully expressed :)

"Imagination is northern lights

Coloring the past"

That is an absolutely amazing metaphor :)

 

It's been a bit since I have been in here and it seems I've missed two contest opportunities... but I love reading the selections you all have shared and I must agree with this post. This metaphor is brilliant!

“The greatest treasures are those invisible to the eye but found by the heart.”~Anon

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