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A few completely random old poems just 'cause I miss posting...
August 20, 2013
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Always interesting reading your earlier work @tlhopkinson 

The style of the "Star Dust" poem gives it a feel of one the earliest pieces of your work I have read even if that doesn't hold to be true. "Eclipse" was my favorite of the three too.

"The Moon
creeps up
on the daylight
as it prowls and
with the sun – set

it pounces"

Love the metaphor, being a cat person it brought a smile to my face :)

Perfection; my greatest strength and weakness.

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