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A few completely random old poems just 'cause I miss posting...
August 20, 2013
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Always interesting reading your earlier work @tlhopkinson 

The style of the "Star Dust" poem gives it a feel of one the earliest pieces of your work I have read even if that doesn't hold to be true. "Eclipse" was my favorite of the three too.

"The Moon
creeps up
on the daylight
Cat-like
as it prowls and
with the sun – set

it pounces"

Love the metaphor, being a cat person it brought a smile to my face :)

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