“Alone I will follow the dark trail, black void on one side and unattainable heights on the other, darkness before and behind me, darkness that pulses and flows and is felt. Then suddenly, an unreal breath of wind coming from infinite depths will bring to my ears again the strange, dimly-remembered sound of the rushing water. When that sound dies, all dies.” ~ Everett Ruess
A man misplaced in the desolate
solitude of monuments. His layers exposed
like desert thumbs, chiseled siltstone lines cut
across the grain and thirsting for ink.
A mirage can be liberating—arriving
in a fourth world, a dreamscape in the negative,
blackness brushed away with horsehair
and burnished into day. Ethereal elements
shook the grit from his skin, separated
the demons and left them feeble and ruddy
to harden in the sun. A man misplaced
carves out the landscape of his own ghost—
death’s first witness. His axis
seeps into sandstone, walls
that leave behind mundane
manuscripts and temporal treasures
etched into simplistic black and light.
This one received an honorary mention in the Utah Arts Festival Ironpen competition this year where writers had 24 hours to create an original work from a prompt, which is the image of a Ruess woodblock print of Monument Valley here in Utah. I learned so much from this prompt and was so pleased with the poem, winning something was just icing on the cake!
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I can see why
enjoyed the images
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A man misplaced seems to be a man who is stripped from the world and its influence, and all that is left to remain is the individual himself. Truly thought-provoking. This poem is outlined with strong and haunting descriptions which awed me as well. Congrats on the honorary mention!
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Glad to see you're getting caught up on thoughts :). Thank you as always for the comments!
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