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alone at thoughts
September 18, 2015
1:55 am
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jump on pillows

bounce on chairs

we-e-e sounds

in the air

check out

fridge ick

nothing fresh in there

ate all the green candy

in the dish

left a few

that will do

what was that?

sounds of wheels scrolling

down the page

sounds of words spoken low

I am not alone

some one is reading

Blush

well I only broke one spring

and there is lots of yellow and red candy left

help yourself

I did

ha ha

and

write a poem

I did

boing

blush

no

it was not the door bell

I can tell

it was another broken spring

September 18, 2015
7:48 pm
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Cool structure here! Chaotic but in a good, creative way. The sudden "blush" mention made me smile. 

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