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by phoebe age 7 (my daughter )
January 22, 2014
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there was a girl called Gracie

and she was very naughty, one day  she ran away

to join the circus because she dreamed about being a clown.

But she didn't smile very much so being  clown was not for her.

so instead she stood and thought for a while and decided

to wake up has it was all a dream.

by Phoebe Lou Broomhall

 

 

January 22, 2014
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phoebe has be going on for days to have a little say on here, so tonight I  have let her type what ever she wants ha ha  well done phoebe x

 

January 22, 2014
11:54 pm
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What an excellent poem for a 7 year old! Makes me think of that saying the grass is always greener on the other side of the fence.

Great work :)

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January 23, 2014
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Bravo Phoebe Lou Broomhall....................... to create something that offers us the chance to see things through the eyes and mind of one who might just be our youngest poet here at Thoughtsinc is wonderful.............. I enjoyed your poem and hope to hear more from you.

 

Write on Phoebe Lou Broomhall........................ write on

 

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Those individuals who deem themselves perfect barely scratch an elbow in their fall from grace. Wm Steele

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