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carried a way
July 10, 2014
4:44 pm
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just being
here
undirected love
reaching me
teaching me
sometimes
 
it seems
sometimes
there is no reason
for being
 
existence is yes
fundamentally
an accident
of mine
 
as logically sentient
why cope with the stress
and all the rest that comes
from an interest in
self preservation
 
it doesn't take much
to shut down
 
I had been thinking this way
when a moment of Zen
breathing out
breathing in
lead to a peace
stresses unstressed
and released
 
I faced my face
I was graced
 
time is a stream
life is a dream
find an inter-tube
jump in
hang on
float
let it carry you
a good ways
July 11, 2014
12:06 am
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This is a really workable piece. Lots of goodies in there.

I am a man with one distinguishing manner. I view life as a nonstop roll by circus. Whatever my senses signal to my brain, it is received as humor.
August 1, 2014
11:24 am
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I really like this one! I think the last stanza is the perfect way to end it since it kind of takes a turn from the thoughtfulness and confusion of life in the previous ones then rolls the morale in one simple stanza. Each stanza had its own, almost unique story to tell and point to share. Enjoyed!

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