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Fierce Autumn
October 28, 2012
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Grey opaque sky

Thick cloak of clouds

Dense treacherous fogue

Wind stands still

And so the nature is.

 

Drowned in water

Trapped in an eternal degradation

covered in wetness

Matter is crying bleak.

 

Yellow bewildered trees

Leaves are falling,and falling like tears

When sorrow and cold conquered all Earth

Frigid rain consumes all joy,hope and will.

 

Theres seldom sun in sight

In this mourning land

Theres often grief in heart

In this mighty autumnal land.

November 8, 2012
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Claudiu,

This covers the bleak and tediousness of a season that is also beautiful too. Very ceative wording in your descriptions.

These are days best viewed from a picture window.

 

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I am a man with one distinguishing manner. I view life as a nonstop roll by circus. Whatever my senses signal to my brain, it is received as humor.
November 9, 2012
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This is a remarkable poem, the word choices and autumnal earth expressions are immaculate :)

Perfection; my greatest strength and weakness.
November 10, 2012
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Thank you for the nice words uniquelylost :D

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