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Hell Hounds
February 5, 2013
8:14 pm
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Can you feel them

Fleeing in the night

Running faster 

Always in the night

Eyes of fire

Dancing in the night

Mournful voices

Calling in the night

They are coming

Flying through the night

Coming, coming, coming 

The hounds of the Wild Hunt

"We have doomed the Wolf not for what it is, but for what we have deliberately and mistakenly perceived it to be..the mythologized epitome of a savage, ruthless killer..which is, in reality no more than a reflexed images of ourself."
February 5, 2013
8:50 pm
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Oh, I really love this! The lines are so hauntingly beautiful. You described the hounds perfectly in their approach, and I liked your repetitions very much! Well done!

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February 5, 2013
11:29 pm
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Nice work, dark, descriptive, and nice progression. Opening was amazing and I really liked these lines-

"Running faster 

Always in the night"

Perfection; my greatest strength and weakness.

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