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Live through adversities
January 3, 2013
11:12 pm
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When you wonder through life a long time, you can easily lose your identity
Letting your battles and fears mold you away from a future you can not see
Its bad enough you had to live through raw events
Then we choose to carry them along, like nothing can fix our permanent dents
Whether it’s something physical that leaves you forever scarred
Or an emotional battle that withers your heart
But we all have to face our own adversities
Our true test is when we still smile despite the least
You’re tempted to say give up, you will always be cursed
Life can never get better; it’s been like this since birth
Allow our past to determine how we live today
Scared to show our true self, scared you’ll push another away
Because when things go wrong, we always blame ourselves
You are your biggest enemy! So don’t be so hard on yourself!
Learn from your battles but also learn to open your heart again
Because in this world, you can even be betrayed by your own kin
That’s why we should live for today and be grateful for a lot
Yesterdays already gone, tomorrows not promised so give today all we got!

Man is born to live, not to prepare for life. - Boris Pasternak
January 4, 2013
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Very motivational! This a rather deep piece and has a lot of truth and meaning behind it-I like that you made the lines rhyme to give what could possibly be a bit overwhelming a nice flow and easiness to read. You also didn't try to sugar-coat anything, which I'm sure will make this real and personal for every one who reads. Well done!

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January 4, 2013
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Im thrilled that you liked it, thank you for reading...Im glad you understood the message :)

Man is born to live, not to prepare for life. - Boris Pasternak

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