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my dad
December 30, 2013
2:39 pm
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Farewell my wife and my loved ones

I guess you'll know where Ile be

Sitting on a river bank

shading from the sun under a tree

Its peaceful here and the waters are calm

there are good people here who will do me no harm

for there like me with there rods in their hands

and there nets at the ready for fishes to land

so think of me here, the place I will be

where everyday my dearests,   you to, can fish with me . 

January 1, 2014
11:31 pm
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made me think about my 'spot' on the bank of a pond

 

transition of love’s

heaven holds a peaceful scene

beyond life’s struggle

January 2, 2014
11:05 am
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yes well said written for my father in law who passed away ,his love of fishing was truly heaven:) 

January 7, 2014
1:17 pm
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very nice contribute to your father-in-law....I imagine it brought comfort to the family, well done

Man is born to live, not to prepare for life. - Boris Pasternak
January 12, 2014
1:01 am
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This is a very sweet poem, and a lovely, peaceful look at passing on. Such a calm and relaxing image! It makes me want to sit and fish with this man. And it makes me think that death is a beautiful transition.
 So, thank you for sharing it with us!

 

 

Yes, I'm getting something out of this all-encompassing trip.

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