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The Forgiver
April 18, 2012
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You sit on your cloud every day.

You watch me do wrong and try to show me the way.

No matter how much I do wrong,

Your love for me stays strong.

You forgive me for everything I do.

You give me everything, and still it's never you...

It's never you I always think of.

Then you'll forgive that and wait for my love.

You wait to see me live to see the next day.

You see if this time I might go the right way.

Even if that day I did not think of you,

You will always know my love for you is true.

Man is born to live, not to prepare for life. - Boris Pasternak
April 20, 2012
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This is very cute, I love the story I get in my head with it, it's also beautifullly written smile A very nice poem Jenn smile2

I'm breaking constantly, continuously and always, it's just that nobody sees it - but I'm fine with that, as long as there's something to fix me, too. ~ Me
April 20, 2012
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Night_Sky_Of_Feelings said
This is very cute, I love the story I get in my head with it, it's also beautifullly written smile A very nice poem Jenn smile2

 

thankyou alot...ya I wrote this poem when I was 14...many years ago, but I still think its a good one

Man is born to live, not to prepare for life. - Boris Pasternak

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