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To Jellybean-Month of June Poems- The 3rd
June 3, 2013
10:47 pm
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The past remains a friend to me.

At times when stiffened hands are cold,

The days all numbered now are few.

Begin again my journey slowed.

 

Then steady hands did guide her swing,

 She’d laugh and turn to look at me.

On walks she spoke of angels’ wings

And set my mind adrift.

 

For her my heart will cry aloud.

Then comes a soft melodic sound.

As treetop tenors swoon and sing,

 In blackened plumes and tails

 

Millennia perfect the notes

That saves my soul distressing

Nature knows when we are broken

And gives our hearts caressing

I am a man with one distinguishing manner. I view life as a nonstop roll by circus. Whatever my senses signal to my brain, it is received as humor.
June 3, 2013
10:53 pm
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Ok. An hour to spare in E.S.T.

I have found already that we must write with emotion or what we are emotional about. Yes this could use a bit of tweaking( sorry Bill) but it is raw emotion. Dedicated to my ex-old lady. It was not a lack of love that ended us. I love her still.

Anyway I think I know why I don't care much for poemage. It's all touchy feely stuff.

 

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June 3, 2013
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For the record I did not read this before my last "touchy feely" comment :) . Also, yes, poems often are loaded with emotion. And I was slightly distracted reading this piece because I had a cat named Jellybean. :)

Wine is bottled poetry. ~ Robert Louis Stevenson
June 3, 2013
11:11 pm
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If you made a touchy feely comment and it wasn't in the last 5 minutes then I forgot it already. Don't recall it. Or I was not affected by it. Just coincidence I guess.

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