Over two-thousand years ago a mighty battle was won
When our King died on that cross and declared, “It is done!”
A world full of sin; we were lost in our ways
ALL falling short of God’s glory; righteousness was just a haze
There was handwriting of requirements being held against us
No one could keep all ten, that’s why a savior was a must
Our king set aside His garments and set aside His robe
Humbled Himself to a mere man, bringing truth and grace to show
Having no fault or never committing no sin
He took our criminals death and brought our condemnation to an end
Disarming our enemies from the requirements we couldn’t keep
Giving fresh new hope to all the lost sheep
A worthy sacrifice has finally come!!!
A lamb to cover ALL sins and God gave His only son
Beautifully written and passionate piece. I thought I would share with you that the word "used" in the last line through me off a bit. It seems to have a negative connotation that I'm not sure you intended. Maybe "gave" would be a nice replacement? Just a suggestion. Lovely work!
thank you for your reply....and I agree....use didn't sit well with me either....that's why I posted the poem on here before I shared it sunday...so yall can give feedback...thank you so very much for your comment...ima change it to gave Have a good easter
You too! Glad I could help :).
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fitting peice for Easter makes a change from eggs and bunnies traditional and thanked for sharing
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@craigb12 ooo.I see you have seen some of my other writings lol ....then you ...im glad joy liked this one too....my poem liberty is good and my poets dream
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