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Mars haiku
June 19, 2013
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Well, there are some really good ones on the site... and this is all I've got so far and it's not funny or particularly clever or memorable... so I probably won't submit it. That said, I may think about it a little bit more before I give up entirely.

 

Your temper flares red

stirring dust in the sunlight.

Twin moons say "Sorry."

Wine is bottled poetry. ~ Robert Louis Stevenson
June 20, 2013
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I like that!  I saw where one of the Hubbled telescopes discovered another 150 planets. Not in our solar system, obviously but out there somewhere. 

I am a man with one distinguishing manner. I view life as a nonstop roll by circus. Whatever my senses signal to my brain, it is received as humor.
June 20, 2013
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I love the personification.

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June 21, 2013
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enjoyed

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June 21, 2013
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Thanks all!

Wine is bottled poetry. ~ Robert Louis Stevenson

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