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morning winter balcony
December 2, 2014
11:07 pm
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frosty breakfast blues

cold patio syrup runs

at a slow snail’s pace

December 6, 2014
6:22 pm
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I like the image this creates, but to be honest, the word "runs" when talking about food keeps stopping me... maybe "drips"? 

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December 6, 2014
11:57 pm
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@tlhopkinson 

 

cold makes cheeks rosy

and the squirrels all wear their

stolen tea cozies  

 

drips hang suspended

time frozen animation

waiting for the sun

 

thank you smile

December 9, 2014
6:51 pm
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More lovely imagery as always :). 

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December 17, 2014
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What about trails....

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December 26, 2014
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Winter's simplicity at its best...

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