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spider in the tub
June 13, 2014
2:30 am
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spider in the tub
though you cannot mean to bathe
you are dressed for it
June 13, 2014
1:01 pm
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Love the angles. Point of view is everything. 

With all those eyes

and all those legs

It sits and watches

as I roll up a paper

slowly walk to them

even speak to them

-_splat_-

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I am a man with one distinguishing manner. I view life as a nonstop roll by circus. Whatever my senses signal to my brain, it is received as humor.
June 14, 2014
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Hey Mr Spider, watch yourself there,

Don't walk across the bathtub without a care.

Can't see that I'm about to shower?

The water will splash down, full of power.

It will push and pull you down the drain,

And you, my friend, won't be seen again!

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'Books aren't written, they're rewritten. Including your own. It is one of the hardest things to accept, especially after the seventh rewrite hasn't quite done it... Michael Crichton
June 16, 2014
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enjoyed

 

two miles back

 

took a fly home and

fell into the slippery zone

longest water ride

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