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January 18, 2013
4:23 pm
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Its your life, so do what you will
'don't need it, you got your fill
So throw it away, let it crash and burn
Let it break, and so the tables will turn

It's not here, anything you've been looking for
or its hidden with everything you've hid before.
I can't believe you see me like you saw him in the past
You wont see me this day, or even on my last.
You have so much more then the little I have to share
I don't belong here, so why should you even care?

You kill off my trust when you lie.
Will you say we tried
when love dies?
I believed that maybe there was more of a place for me
but it's all or nothing, and you feel so disgracefully
towards us.
What is love?
Can I ever get it right?
You gave up,
not enough,
just take me to the light.

It's not here, everything I've been searching for
or its lost with everything that I've hid before.
I can't say I see you like I saw you in the past
You wont see me this day, or even on my last.
There is so much more then the sorrow we live to share
I don't belong here, so why do I even care?

God help me,
Lead me to a better time
so I no longer need to pretend
I've walked a fine line
but it always proves too much
in the end.
Help me be a better me
help me be
everything I was meant to be.

Everything's lost with every mistake we made before
God help me, God help me
find what I've been looking for

“I firmly believe that any man's finest hour, the greatest fulfillment of all that he holds dear, is the moment when he has worked his heart out in a good cause and lies exhausted on the field of battle - victorious”
January 19, 2013
7:10 am
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I sang this to some music I made up. Pretty cool. Chorus is excellent. Lyrics are tough to write. Nice work.

I am a man with one distinguishing manner. I view life as a nonstop roll by circus. Whatever my senses signal to my brain, it is received as humor.
January 19, 2013
1:28 pm
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Why thank you :) I've been trying to meditate before(to get an idea), during(to actually pull through), and after(to revise) I write to try to get a good result. I haven't had time to write stuff lately, so I hope it didn't come off as rusty.

“I firmly believe that any man's finest hour, the greatest fulfillment of all that he holds dear, is the moment when he has worked his heart out in a good cause and lies exhausted on the field of battle - victorious”
January 24, 2013
11:09 pm
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powerful lyrics, I like the way you cycled the rhymes, it flows nice. Whole song came out excellent, I especially enjoyed the opening and the chorus. My favorite part-

"It's not here, everything I've been searching for
or its lost with everything that I've hid before."

Damn that's good :)  

Perfection; my greatest strength and weakness.
January 30, 2013
6:31 pm
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Thanks Jesse :) I appreciate it, and its funny that part is your favorite because it actually has a typo in it(based on the original in my notebook), but I'm not gonna fix whats not broken.

“I firmly believe that any man's finest hour, the greatest fulfillment of all that he holds dear, is the moment when he has worked his heart out in a good cause and lies exhausted on the field of battle - victorious”

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