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The Way I Feel (Everyone Will Feel)
August 2, 2013
1:48 pm
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I will take a journey with my spirit to the sun

Fill myself with happiness to share with everyone

Everyone will lose their pain

Their lives begin brand new

Everyone will feel the way

Everyone will feel

Everyone will feel the way

I feel when I'm with you

 

I will ride the seven winds into the house of dawn

I'll eat the golden apples as I learn the morning song

The world with shine and sparkle

In the early morning dew

Everyone will feel the way

Everyone will feel

Everyone will feel the way

I feel when I'm with you

 

You are kisses in the spring

You overload my senses

You make my body ring

 

You are dreams that do come true

[And everyday I live to dream

Another dream of you] (3 x)

 

I dip myself in paradise and rise up like a cloud

I'll chronicle the tale to tell the disbeliving crowd

I'll speak of awe and wonder

Everybody's due

Everyone will feel the way

Everyone will feel

[Everyone will feel the way

I feel when I'm with you] (3 x)

Everyone will feel

the sun/ rising

Everyone will feel

the joy / rising

Everyone will feel

the love / rising

Everyone will feel

Everyone will feel the way

Everyone will feel

Everone will feel the way

[I feel when I'm with you]  (3 x to end)

 

August 2, 2013
9:45 pm
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This has such a happy, sweet tone especially when the love lines are read. The first lines of all the verses/stanzas are absolutely wonderful-such description and imagery that is too good to not be praised. I think "riding the seven winds into the house of dawn" would have to be my favorite. At first, the "everyone will feel the way...everyone will feel...everyone will feel the way.." caught me off guard, but I like the repetition overall. Great write!

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