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August 6, 2013
2:38 am
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 streets are red

it is raining lead

Johnny don't go out to play

the streets are red

Johnny is dead

for at home he would not stay

and all the colors,..... are lost in his dreams

and all his colors,..... are lost from dreams

where everything,.... is … as bad as it seems

and all the colors

are lost in his dreams

 

streets are red

it is raining lead

Billy don't go out today

the streets are red

Billy is dead

a shell went astray

and all the colors,..... are lost in his dreams

and all his colors,..... are lost from dreams

where everything,.... is … as bad as it seems

and all the colors

are lost in his dreams

 

streets are red

it is raining lead

Tommy hid there for a prank

the streets are red

Tommy is dead

and all the colors,..... are lost in his dreams

and all his colors,..... are lost from dreams

where everything,.... is … as bad as it seems

and all the colors

are lost in his dreams

(c) DCB

 

August 7, 2013
10:38 pm
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That one's a bit dark... like the raining lead bit.

Wine is bottled poetry. ~ Robert Louis Stevenson
August 7, 2013
11:32 pm
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thank you for reading

and comments

 

yes it is a little dark and I wish it was all fiction

originally it was written for a combination metal/light tune

never went anywhere but enjoyed trying ;)

 

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