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May 28, 2015
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it starts off cliché, but just give it a chance :p
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Hold me close.

Breathe me in.

morph to one.

as we mend, in shared tranquility.

we conspired.

then aspired.

love transpired.

like soul cherries on a tapered vine.

 

spirits through wormholes,

met in the stellar center.

dream worlds on hold,

together,

entitled to frozen time.

boundaries like fire hoops.

insecurities like cloaks of invisibility,

made transparent by twisting serenity.

 

we go backward,

than backwards again.

we go forward,

than forward again.

we end up, reliving the present,

confused by the result of so many steps.

 

lets choose a direction.

make sense of inception, by simple deception of implied rules with defiance.

rippled guidance

 

lacerate to operate.

break the bones to ease the pain.

indicate originate.

stop the chance of a relay.

 

flailing on a whim

floating on the wind, like a weightless anvil

its clear to me, this is a chance

one I'd put everything on,

to intertwine with personified paradise.

I'm petrified,

by your touch I'm electrified.

I must have a copper heart.

 

fearless intentions to obtain nirvana

peering through a spyglass,

to see my persona.

ill expose it all to you, on a wooden platter

maybe you'll transmute it,

to one of silver rather.

 

you are so divinely transcending

 

spirits through wormholes,

met in the stellar center.

dream worlds on hold,

together,

entitled to frozen time.

boundaries like fire hoops,

insecurities like cloaks of invisibility,

made transparent by twisting serenity.

September 18, 2015
7:56 pm
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Just whoa... 

Great piece. I love the rhymes, and the word choices are amazing! I do not think they could create a more vivid picture! It is as if you chose the most exciting words then successfully strung them together. Enjoyed!

 

Sorry for the late reply, by the way. 

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