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Life Without You
November 5, 2012
5:34 pm
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A heart shattered.

Wings bound to the floor.

Having nothing in life.

Crying for more.

Waiting for eternity.

Seeking my one dream come true.

Forever lost in oblivion...

Life without you.

 

 

*My poetry may not be the greatest in the world, but it is mine. Please respect that in the same way that I respect yours and do not steal. Thank you!*

 

“The greatest treasures are those invisible to the eye but found by the heart.”~Anon
November 5, 2012
8:08 pm
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Wow...that is really good....

My identity can be found in my writing
November 6, 2012
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Love the "Wings bound to the floor" line... very nice

Wine is bottled poetry. ~ Robert Louis Stevenson
November 6, 2012
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tlhopkinson said
Love the "Wings bound to the floor" line... very nice

Ah, that is my favorite line as well. Thank you!

“The greatest treasures are those invisible to the eye but found by the heart.”~Anon
November 9, 2012
5:11 pm
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I really like it. Good job.my gf liked it too:)) ;) laugh

November 14, 2012
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Another extremely well written poem KC :) Your work is refined, not one extra word to be found.

Perfection; my greatest strength and weakness.
November 21, 2012
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Beautifully written smile3

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