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November 16, 2013
5:33 pm
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Stratus clouds breaking

Heavenly rays of light shine

Life luminaries

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November 20, 2013
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Nicely constructed with awesome angles of view.

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uniquelylost
I am a man with one distinguishing manner. I view life as a nonstop roll by circus. Whatever my senses signal to my brain, it is received as humor.
December 17, 2013
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How did I miss this one... Beautiful word choices as always! I love the thought of clouds breaking...and the second line has such a natural flow. Great piece!

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December 20, 2013
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Thanks for the comments @SerenaLantha and @Forgewright . Looking forward to getting to write & read some stuff whilst having days off around the holidays!

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