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August 31, 2014
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windows  of angry light

 for windows that discovered sight

images look real not right

headsets surround sight

and bring sweats late into the night

bloody hand images unreal

empathy hidden from to feel

games train like an onion peels

fear and fantasy look real

September 1, 2014
8:04 pm
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I'm not sure what this one is about, but I completely dig the onion peel metaphor!

Wine is bottled poetry. ~ Robert Louis Stevenson
September 4, 2014
11:29 pm
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exposed to the dark

 the damage of warfare games

on young growing minds

 

are there disorder

generated chemicals

made in a young brain

 

and I get on a tangent sometimes ;)

and ride it like a fast pony

September 9, 2014
3:18 pm
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OK, I'm trackin' now... LOL, ride it like a fast pony :).

Wine is bottled poetry. ~ Robert Louis Stevenson
September 9, 2014
4:57 pm
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At first I was confused about what the poem was about. However upon reading your explanation and then reading the poem again I think that it is brilliant.

Whilst video games can be good I do think that many children play certain games at too young an age. You only have at the difference between kids that are 12/13 now back 6 six years ago to when I was 12/13. My age was really the first to be able to access such violent games but there weren't many out there then and as a result many never saw this violence as a fun and thrilling thing and to carry it out in real life. Nowadays though kids are subjected to video game violence and even violence found in videos online and it affects them. Not all of them but some and sadly those some end up too often with terrible consequences.

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