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insects loud buzzing
June 8, 2014
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insects loud buzzing
stifling the heat of day
no companion cloud
I repent my winter wish
is there nowhere in-between
June 9, 2014
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This is definitely something we all go through most years! Altho, the weather has been fabulous lately, the heat is about to kick in. Question though, is the buzzing stifling the heat? Maybe "Stifling heat" would work better if that's not intended.

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June 9, 2014
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okay, how about:

insects buzz

heat stifling

empty sky

foolish winter wish

no companion

June 9, 2014
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I like the first four lines, not sure the last one works with the rest.

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June 10, 2014
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la-la cookware can do it

from the freezer to the oven

I crack if not warmed first

 

enjoyed your piece

especially repenting a winter wish ...

here we all make ;)

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June 10, 2014
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laughenjoyed !

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June 10, 2014
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thanks for the comments (c4a1g, you crack me up)...you'll have to trust that all the lines belong.  I moved 'companion' to the end of the piece to make it more obvious.  Guess it worked.

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