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Tanka Terra-form-Month of June Poems-The 19th
June 21, 2013
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Conscientiousness

 So perfectly created

Cosmic push and pull

Vastly interceding space

Problematic life outcomes

I am a man with one distinguishing manner. I view life as a nonstop roll by circus. Whatever my senses signal to my brain, it is received as humor.
June 22, 2013
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Nicely done... in a specific form even... continueing to impress!

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Forgewright
Wine is bottled poetry. ~ Robert Louis Stevenson
June 22, 2013
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Thanks Trish. Got a few days behind. I off till Monday morning so Woo hoo, time to catch up.

I am a man with one distinguishing manner. I view life as a nonstop roll by circus. Whatever my senses signal to my brain, it is received as humor.
June 23, 2013
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I like! This has a very "higher power" feel to it to me at least. 

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July 30, 2013
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Thank you so much for introducing me to this form.  As to the poem, for me it seems to denote the internal struggle that manifests itself into a reasoned and careful response.  That may not be what you were going for, but I thought I'd share my impression.  Thanks again.. 

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Forgewright
July 30, 2013
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Blasted 'cosmic push and pull.' That's what has my mojo so effed up! Now what's the cure Forge? Cool poem to read. Could be a robotic horoscope reading............ 'Prob...lem...mat...ic life out...comes.'Did I really say that? Sh1t it's been a long day..................

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July 31, 2013
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Lol Bill. I thought the cure all was liquer? Might not fix it but you won't give a damn!

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I am a man with one distinguishing manner. I view life as a nonstop roll by circus. Whatever my senses signal to my brain, it is received as humor.
August 8, 2013
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Whoa is me.................... Reading your last words of wisdom @Forgewright has given me cause for great sadness and sorrow. I don't give a damn when I'm not under the influence...................so if I then drink will I really really really really not give a damn????? What to do? Help!

Those individuals who deem themselves perfect barely scratch an elbow in their fall from grace. Wm Steele

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