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Bring On The Wonder
November 19, 2011
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Bring On The Wonder

 

I see you there hidden and alone,

Feeling you have much to atone,

Do you know that you are my hearts song,

I have pushed you down in my soul for too long,

Is there some way I can go to you,

There must be something I can do,

In a way we are the others salvation,

All together a whole new creation,

Tear our broken hearts asunder,

Now is time to bring on the wonder.

National borders aren't even speed bumps on the information superhighway. ~Tim May
November 28, 2011
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Star, your writing "brings on the wonder" everytime I read it Smile. This poem is short, but it contains so much. I give it a 5 of 5.

Perfection; my greatest strength and weakness.
November 28, 2011
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Thank you so muck Jesse, I hope you continue to read and enjoy my work.

National borders aren't even speed bumps on the information superhighway. ~Tim May
November 29, 2011
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Star, is this how you feel today or is this an older poem? Sounds hopeful to me. Your a 5 Kiddo.

I am a man with one distinguishing manner. I view life as a nonstop roll by circus. Whatever my senses signal to my brain, it is received as humor.
November 29, 2011
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This was written about how I feel right now, it's hopeful but tentatively so.

National borders aren't even speed bumps on the information superhighway. ~Tim May

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