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March 20, 2016
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an orange

had a range

of fifty feet

and came flying after an overcooked beet

went clean across a busy street

slammed into the head of a cop on the beat

two chefs in the kitchen called Martha and Pete

that argued from the Café to the street

 were arrested but turned loose

when someone realized the blood was beet juice

March 30, 2016
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Whoa. Really cool rhythm!

I expected all the close end rhymes to throw me off, but I think they definitely work. 

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