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February 11, 2013
10:48 pm
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Hidden thoughts

Hidden feelings

Spinning, spinning

Round and round

Take a mask

Daybreak is dawning


Thrive in the shadows

Die in the light


Painted faces

Pointed toes

Spinning, spinning

Round and round

Keep your mask

noonday is calling


Thrive in the shadows

Die in the light


Fleeting wishes

Fleeing dreams

Spinning, spinning

Round and round

Leave your mask

Midnight is falling


Our lies thrive in the shadows

Die in the light

"We have doomed the Wolf not for what it is, but for what we have deliberately and mistakenly perceived it to be..the mythologized epitome of a savage, ruthless killer..which is, in reality no more than a reflexed images of ourself."
February 14, 2013
8:49 pm

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This is so wonderfully written! I really enjoyed this piece. The message and repetitions really make this poem. Well done!

My identity can be found in my writing
March 13, 2013
11:41 am

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Bravo Kitten. Sort of a bustling verse with a tad dark ending. I liked it very much. Just the right combination of words here. Any more and it would have been too much. Less would have caused it to fall. Often times we forget as writers that the unwritten word is often the most important.

Write on Kitten................

Those individuals who deem themselves perfect barely scratch an elbow in their fall from grace. Wm Steele

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