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July 31, 2014
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Mother moon and sister stars,
Shine your light upon us all;
Guide us from the setting day
Through the magic of nightfall.   
Keep the misting sky at bay,
This we sing and this we pray-
May you reign forever high,
This we chant and this we cry.
My identity can be found in my writing
August 1, 2014
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What a pleasant surprise............ I'm glad I opted to work from home today............... You certainly do have a remarkable ability to offer the reader a sense of wonderment with your poetry @SerenaLantha .............. You  may well have traversed time to write this one........... Gone to a time and place where a huddled mass of whomever had the need for clear skies at night......... Maybe a group at a dangerous river crossing wishing not to be swept away..........  Who knows maybe I'll adopt this one as a 'let me get home dry' anthem when I'm on the bike and rain threatens............ I greatly enjoyed this rhyme and am glad you've found time to write...........

Semper Fi

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