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January 8, 2012
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Dive deep into the lucious waters of my soul.

Swim through the love and pure ecstasy it bears.

Grasp onto the beating heart of the creature you adore,

And squeeze it ever so gently, my dear.

Become intertwined in the tentacles of my mind,

And try to hold onto my main vision.

But dont drown yourself because I'm too kind,

Yet explore the horty leagues and meet your mission.

I tried to keep you forever in my arms,

But my grip was too much to handle.

Alls I ever wanted was to love and to charm.

To keep the flame alive from our candle.

Alas, I must let go now,

For I did drown you in the screen.

Alls that I wish now,

Is that you swim forever and discover what it means.

January 8, 2012
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I like this work but you misspelled swim once

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January 8, 2012
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haha I need to check my spelling a bit more.

January 8, 2012
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Don't worry, we all have those moments

National borders aren't even speed bumps on the information superhighway. ~Tim May
January 9, 2012
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I like the visuals I get when reading this poems Cool

Perfection; my greatest strength and weakness.
January 10, 2012
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I like it too-the visuals.........

"Commit random acts of kindness and sensible acts of beauty." author unknown

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