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The Spirit of the Trees
June 15, 2013
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Some say that the trees can speak,

That peace among brothers is all that they seek.

They sway to and fro as they dance with the wind,

Creaking and moaning as if greeting a friend.

Some say that the trees can sing,

And their leaves prance around with the joy that it brings.

Never stopping their song as it's carried by wings. 

"He who does not know can know from learning"
June 18, 2013
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Beautiful poem! Was clearly written by someone whom is quite in tune with nature :)

Perfection; my greatest strength and weakness.
June 19, 2013
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yea, this ones good. Everything fits as you read it. Smooth like a Sunday morning.... unless you par tayed the night before.

I am a man with one distinguishing manner. I view life as a nonstop roll by circus. Whatever my senses signal to my brain, it is received as humor.
June 21, 2013
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This is a beautiful poem...I love the almost fairy-tale feel in the first two lines especially. Nature is often too incredible to describe, but you describe it well! 

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June 24, 2013
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Beautiful spirited poem. I do love it and very much agree with the above posted comments

“The greatest treasures are those invisible to the eye but found by the heart.”~Anon

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