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I promise this time I’m ready
August 28, 2012
9:05 pm
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I promise this time I’m ready to love you, my love.  I do confess I was untrue, the times before. Lust held me in her shallow but unrelenting hand.  Oh, I remember the sight of those hot bodied infused nights when I kissed her lips and the sky exploded around me in a wave that beat me, beat me, beat me down until I felt myself drowning in an ecstasy so profound I lost direction of mind and the circumstance of mortality.  I thought myself immortal, lifted as a god to utopian fields of pure bliss.  Oh, I do remember the kiss I kissed, the bright eyes and willing bodies that called me from the study of the heavens and their revelations.  Poor student to have been so easily led from purpose to pursuit, the slightest gesture, the softest whisper, destroyed the titanic walls I built in defense of deference.  I now see how desperately I wandered from miss to misadventure, understanding nothing, blind, deaf, daft, and forever hungry, craving love by feeding lust.  I must confess, though I was untrue, all the while I was truly wooing you.  You must have known, you were always there, teasing like a taste of memory that will not come, I’d reach for you and you’d move the merest touch away and should I get too close, it must have been by your power, a maid of your design you assign to blunt the chase and I’d be eagerly swept away to experience once again, not the glory of completeness, just the shadow of your essence.  But that was in a younger day, I am now sufficiently aged, I will wait for the substance of the shadow, to the grave.  Please show yourself plain this time, and hurry.  I see another who looks like scheming chance has chosen to lead me to the play.  Maybe, is she you?  I am ready this time I swear my love, to love you.  I will wait forever and a day.  But it just now occurred to me, there is this thing needs my attention, a short dutiful intervention, it will take a second maybe two, and then I’ll be back, I promise, waiting forever and ever waiting for you.

September 5, 2012
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