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Gray Days
June 30, 2014
12:56 am
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Gray days in small
Towns, but I still
Stick around saying
I'm going one day

Some day, someway
Hopefully -in the 
Cornfields I dream
Of palm trees, beaches,

California hills, in the
Summer when it's gray
I wonder how it is faraway
Near the sea even 

In the summer, that's 
Where I want to be
It's a gray day in June 
Looking down the 

Small town street 
Listless in the heat
Even on a hot summer
Day I want to be faraway

My life has mostly
Been gray days in
Small towns lost in
Loneliness not 

Much happiness,
Year after year
Waiting for summer
To appear or waiting
To go faraway-

June 30, 2014
3:24 pm
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good effort, well defined sentiment.

July 8, 2014
10:06 am
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It's a nice thought to go far away from gray days. I definitely can relate... I've seen far too many of those. 

“The greatest treasures are those invisible to the eye but found by the heart.”~Anon

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