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That great time
July 31, 2012
3:41 pm
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That time of year

When birds learn to fly

And people go to the seaside

That time of year

When the poet’s hand

Can paint a beautiful sunset

With words sometimes hard to find

That time of year

When love blooms

When you don’t even have to try

To feel love’s arrows falling from the sky

You feel nauseous and a bit dizzy

Blame it all on the flaming sun

But little do you know

You’re choking with the fragrances of thousands of kisses

Sent by lovers from everywhere

To their loved ones.

Again the air is warm

And the meadows are sparkling with a green shine

Like emeralds facing a bright light

All this so you can learn

What love is, because now it’s your turn

Because no one will teach you the secrets of this mystical riddle

Only summer with its boring rays.

Imagine!

Your first kiss, with an orange sunset behind

A warm breeze to calm both a bit

A ladybug, flying in circles next to you

And then, before you know it

Falling stars cover the skies

Making your every wish come true

 

That great time

For which we all cry

That time

Everyone desires

And it’s probably worth more

That words can describe

It’s summertime!

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August 1, 2012
12:35 am
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tudoricus,

Great poem. Loved the descriptions. Well done!

 

Forgewright

I am a man with one distinguishing manner. I view life as a nonstop roll by circus. Whatever my senses signal to my brain, it is received as humor.
August 7, 2012
12:10 am
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This has such a positive and wondrous vibe to it :) Nice work. 

Perfection; my greatest strength and weakness.
August 7, 2012
3:52 am
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Thank you very much:)Glad you enjoyed it

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August 13, 2012
2:45 pm
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Congrats on the contest win!  POTATO!!!

I am a man with one distinguishing manner. I view life as a nonstop roll by circus. Whatever my senses signal to my brain, it is received as humor.

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