We have so many other lovers
and it's such a joy to be free,
sometimes I hope that you remember
just what you mean to me.
I learned from you to love myself,
and in myself I found
the world could fit inside my heart,
yet always hold you sound.
So dear, let's make this day about us--
our sweetness, you and me,
and marvel that we've come so far
from fear and jealousy!
I also thought the rhymes made this poem flow very well. I loved the second stanza, is powerful, deep, and exceptional expressed. Nice work!
I really like all the different perspectives of Valentine's day that were presented in this contest because love is different for everyone.
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