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Forever Valentine
February 4, 2013
11:48 am
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Cupid has finally pierced my heart, with an arrow from above.
But a worthy offering I must bequeath, before I’ll have your love.
So here’s a list of what I have to give, upon this special day.
My wish is you’ll return them, in a very special way.

My eyes:                     See only you.
My hands:                   Will pick you up when you have
                                    fallen.
My trust:                      You may go & be yourself.
My thoughts:               You will always be in them.
My dreams:                 Our lives be built together.
My undying loyalty:      I will be faithful to you.
My utmost respect:      You are my equal.
My heart:                      I’ll always love you.

Sweet Love these things I give to you, I pray them to your heart.
I know you are my destiny, I’ve known it from the start.
Won’t you respond with your own love, a kiss sweeter than any wine.
And that sealed kiss shall consummate, a Forever Valentine.

Those individuals who deem themselves perfect barely scratch an elbow in their fall from grace. Wm Steele
February 4, 2013
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As I have said before, I just love your style! The rhymes seem effortless yet still so beautiful. Your "list" really makes this piece... very creative and romantic idea!

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February 5, 2013
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Thank you as always SerenaLantha. Some things are very easy for me to write about. I've been blessed with an amazing Valentine twenty two tears now.

Those individuals who deem themselves perfect barely scratch an elbow in their fall from grace. Wm Steele
February 6, 2013
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You are such a creative writer! The middle portion especially is wonderful. Everything flows so well. 

“The greatest treasures are those invisible to the eye but found by the heart.”~Anon
February 6, 2013
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Thank you very much KC.................

Those individuals who deem themselves perfect barely scratch an elbow in their fall from grace. Wm Steele

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