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Love full
February 5, 2013
1:01 am
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you are always here with me

never far away

on my mind

in my heart

with my thoughts today

 

love is

love was

love will again

love whole

love half

love full my friend

February 5, 2013
11:47 am
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This is so sweet...I love your light and subtle rhymes especially-they give this very lovely piece an airy feel. The differences between the two stanzas are also very interesting and seem planned out-I like that the first part is very personal, while the second is almost like a general truth to the world. Really enjoyed this!

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February 6, 2013
12:43 am
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This is wonderful! I especially love the ending. 

“The greatest treasures are those invisible to the eye but found by the heart.”~Anon

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