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My Valentine Dear
February 6, 2013
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                                  The birds of the sky, may find it 

                                                 On the wing. 

                                 It come’s to the lonely deer, when

                                     The snow melts into spring.

                           Even a grey wolf baying at the Moons light, 

                                 May find a mate’s tender heart to 

                                     warm him through the night.

                                       It come’s to all who waits,

                                    Or so the wise have been told,

                                    But I’m going to ask you now,

                                            Before I get to old.

                                         Give your heart to me,

                                          as I give mine to you.

                                         For your love so sweet

                                      could never leave me blue.

                                         To your heart,  I always

                                                 Will be true 

                                        Your love would give me,                                                         

                                                 a Joyful tear.

                                            My Valentine dear.
                                        

                                      
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February 6, 2013
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Such a creative idea to begin this idea with nature! Love and beauty truly can be found all around....my favorite lines were about the wolf... :) Little guilty pleasure there. The personal touches you give this as this piece progresses tie in with the natural and almost fairy-tale feel of love very well. Such a sweet and deep message. Really enjoyed this!

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Thank you Serena, I'm glad that you liked it. means  a lot.

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