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Sweeter Than A Praline
February 15, 2013
2:28 pm
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Your loving words are sweet,

Sweeter than any candy you’ll ever find,

Do not give me a praline,

For you are richer than anything else.

The greatest gifts are—

Your lips your hair, your eyes—

Your loving words, for me,

For they enlighten my dark world.

Take my heart,

For it beats for you,

Take my soul,

For it chooses only you.

Take my essence,

For you created most of it,

Take my spirit,

For it yearns only for you.

Be my Valentine,

For the sweetest thing I could ever have,

Is you and yourself alone,

For I need nothing else, if I have you.

I'm breaking constantly, continuously and always, it's just that nobody sees it - but I'm fine with that, as long as there's something to fix me, too. ~ Me
February 16, 2013
12:34 pm
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Really romantic and sincere, great work! I love the opening lines-

"Your loving words are sweet,
Sweeter than any candy you’ll ever find,
Do not give me a praline,"

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Perfection; my greatest strength and weakness.

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