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To Prove My Love
February 6, 2013
12:39 am
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I would swim the seven seas.

I would walk the world on my knees.

I would cross over to the heavens...

Just to watch over you.

There is nothing I wouldn't do,

to prove to you that I love you.

 

(This is also a part of a song I've been working on- the chorus- but I thought it was quite romantic and fitting for this contest. Please respect my work and do not steal. Thanks!)

 

“The greatest treasures are those invisible to the eye but found by the heart.”~Anon
February 6, 2013
12:13 pm
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This is such a lovely piece! The first two lines capture the general idea of love very well, but the middle lines about Heaven are just wonderful. They give an almost airy feel to this and deepen the message even more. Really enjoyed this!

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