@forgewrightactive 10 months, 3 weeks ago
Forgewright posted in the topic Taking a stab at a FB poetry page… go and ‘like’ me :). in the forum Announcements 5 years ago
Horse Racing yesterday…..Burn Baby Burn
Played The Perfecta…. 4,3
The five horse took a last second dump and past the 4,3
5,4,3, Didn’t pay Di**
I took a dump there too… 400 bucks worth.
Oh, well back to work today.
A good man draws a circle around him and places those he loves within it.
Some draw a circle and place their wife and children.
Others place many more.
All wisely drawn according to their abilities.
I figured out my problem. I drew to big a circle……
What does it mean when a man has a dream about wearing a dress and looking damn fine in it, but refuses to shave off his beard to finalize the look?
Not that I had this dream…..
But I did look fine…….
Forgewright posted in the topic Among Light (An erasure poem from “Sun stone” by Octavio Paz) in the forum Other forms 5 years, 1 month ago
Wait a minute… hold on. Is this a found poem from an erasure poem?
A poem with each line being erased.
As in, smaller and smaller.
Till it’s gone?
Forgewright posted in the topic (SHANTY TOWN Chapter’s 1&2) Need feedback more chapter’s to come in the forum Writing workshop and challenges 5 years, 1 month ago
Definitely has the feel of a script. I love this kind of narration. I tend to write in a similar fashion. Just needs a bid of clarity.
Nice job reviewing @jamboree. It can be as hard as writing a story yourself.
Your first post put me in mind of C.M. Coolidge paintings of Dogs Playing Poker.
I erased the rest of this post explaining my views on these men. Conspiracy theories just bring people down and upset the population. The end results of their actions validate their eradication. Stomping out the attacks on innocent people is a must but we…[Read more]
Bill said….My own reckoning is that most are hiding deep feelings of hatred, perversion, greed and so on that wouldn’t surface during a conversation at a black jack table……………
These days people don’t bother to hide such habits. No one is held accountable for their actions in public. You don’t dare call someone on their behavior.(Except for…[Read more]
Bill, I feed off large crowds. If I could live in a condo on the strip in Vegas and bullshit with people at the BlackJack table for the rest of my life, I would be happy. I’ve been everywhere I want to go and this would appease my desires completely. Conversations with every type of person from every walk of life. People will tell you more about…[Read more]
@uniquelylost? or is it now Anomalouslymissing?
Your too funny. or in French…to Fu nay.
Shall I write a poem you say
Sly my words, a second look?
a social call unlike Facebook.
fear not I say to those forlorn
to build a diamond in the corn
unless your six year old is hacking on a hotdog.
If Thoughts…[Read more]
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